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Fun At The Beach by RimaPichi Fun At The Beach by RimaPichi
AMG i think this took 3 or 4 days... or more :'D

and it's finally dooone TuT
It's a group pic with mine and my two friends's Pokemon trainers ;u;/


and i'm kinda dissapointed :'D It didn't turn the way i wanted TuT
And i'm sure it's one of those pic where i worked for days and will get like.. 5 comments or so <x'D

Sooo Ivy's (the girl at the front) perspective failed ;u; I don't know how people do that TuT
Roxy's (the black/Pink girl) Pose is painful xD i tried it and it hurt my back xD
And Riley (the boy) well... it's the first time i shadet a topless guy xD

The clouds look a bit too uhm.. "Thick" xD But i fail at clouds anyway xD and i don't even remember when i did clouds the last time >3<

And for the water... I always wanted to be able to draw water, but it's just too hard xD My friend showed me a tutorial (which i'll link as soon as i found it again)
But i still failed xD

Oh and btw the Zorua is small because it's still a baby xD

ANYWAY

Hope you like it ;7;/
:heart:

Pokemon © by Nintendo
Ivy © by :icontantchen:
Riley © by :iconchaosdrawer:
Roxy and art © by me :iconrimapichi: ;u;

I'd be happy if someone would give me critique for improvement QuQ
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Critique by XxEeveeStarxX Jun 27, 2012, 8:07:47 AM
I know you wrote "perspective failed" and it's somewhat true to an extent. I'm not all that great of an artist, but I know how perspective works (I just can't draw it if I needed to.) She could actually be closer in front so that it works.

The clouds fill the background of the picture just fine. It's a great background, but some clods have some rough edges and don't blur into the sky.

The water could be murkier, but water murkiness depends on where you live (where I live it's a blue-ish evergreen color)

The characters drawn, however, are perfect, like how you usually make them. I hope to see more from you in the future :D
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I'll start with the background. I found the sky very well done, only with the condition that the top clouds doesn't blur well with the sky, but that's the only fail I found, the under clouds and light color of the sky brings a beach perspective.

The water is fine but I think you can add some more of lights, like white lines with rough edges for make it more shiny cause the sunshine is strong. The horizon looks too regular, it would see more fine if you add more irregular edges to it.

You are right about Roxy's pose and her butt looks weird in comparison with the body. I found Ivy's perspective fine but she only needs be more closer or bigger.

The color of the skin looks too much light, they need more shade and not much light, also some parts of the clothing and pokemon, for example teddiursa, zorua, Roxy's hair and the girls' swimming costume.

By the way, you draw very well the anatomy and make the characters show the mood you want, the pokemon are cute and don't look like the games' way but them looks fine and well done.

Continue drawing cause I love your drawings and only with practice you will be better. =D
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Ariana-Olds Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   Traditional Artist
I love Zorua! <3
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:iconrimapichi:
RimaPichi Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me too <3
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:iconariana-olds:
Ariana-Olds Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
i love absol
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:iconrimapichi:
RimaPichi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love all dark and ghost types xD
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Ariana-Olds Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013   Traditional Artist
Cool ♥ I love eevee
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Maxwell-eleven Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You love pokemon, no? So cute!Heart
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:iconrimapichi:
RimaPichi Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yah <333
thanks ;u;
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Yumi-chii123 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
the smile...the mouth is too big (the girl on the right).....is roxy a kuudere(quiet ones) type?
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:iconrimapichi:
RimaPichi Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think there aren't really right sizes with the mouths in anime styles xD
Yes she is c:
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TheDoomGeneration Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Yeah, you're right about the pose for the girl on the left, it's actually a reoccuring issue in comics, most people call it the boobs&butt pose. It'd require no spine basically, should probably try to avoid it, it throws off the entirety of the character.
The rest looks pretty okay, though!
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
boob&butt pose alright xD
yah i'll try to avoid it TuT
Thanks <3
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TheyCallMeDanger Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You probably get asked this a lot... and I'm sorry for probably asking an annoying question...but what program do you use to color o: this is just amazing...
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yah and exactly because i'm getting asked the same questions over and over again i have FAQs on my front page T^T
it's all there ;o;

And thank you ;u;
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TheyCallMeDanger Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw that right after I posed it then felt like an asshat ;-; I'm sorry!

But you're welcome c:
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yashagirl8D Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Wow I am mind blowned....
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:iconrimapichi:
RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
in good or bad way? xD
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yashagirl8D Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
In a good way!!! xD
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AuraGombe Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Also ich finds toll. =D
Mir fallen zwar auch nen paar Kritikpunkte auf, aber die wurden hier in den comments /die ich bis jetzt gelesen hab/ schon erwähnt. Was mir hierbei auffällt, das kann aber auch daran liegen, dass du keine Lust mehr drauf hattest, ist die Tatsache, dass sie irgendwie komplett trocken wirken. Sie sind doch im Wasser, oder nicht? Da können sie doch nicht trocken sein. Aber du hast das trotzdem toll gemacht. =D
Man sieht auf jeden Fall, dass du viel Arbeit reingesteckt hast! :heart::hug:
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
danke QuQ

Nee eig liegts daran das sie gerade erst ins wasser sind xD
geplant war es, dass es so wie n foto wird also das man noch den zentriere und so sehen würde, deswegen hab ich sie "ins wasser gehend" gezeichned (sie könne also noch gar nicht nass sein ausser es hat geregnet oder so xD)
aber ich hab das dann i wann vergessen und jetzt is es halt... das xD

QUQ/
:glomp: <33
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AuraGombe Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Bitte. <3

Ach was. Ich glaub dir jetzt einfach mal. XDDDD

;u; <33
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PrincessPyon Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
ahh wow!!! i really love how you colored this !!
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thank you <33
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hitomimichi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Artist
beautiful artwork i love the details but i was wondering if you could help me with a problem that i have i'm also an artist and i want to make videos were
i can show my work but my cam studio doesn't let me record right and also doesn't let me have good quality at all and also doesn't want to go to window
movie maker :( so i can't show my videos at all :( i was wondering that you could help me with that problem :) thank you :) and also love your work mostly
the details :)
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you <3

Sadly Camstudio a swell as hypercam1 and 2 and other recording programms don't work with my computer and i don't know why ;~; I record with Livestream, but if you don't have an accound there and don't have the procaster it wont work ;v;
thanks again <3~
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hitomimichi Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Artist
thanks anyway i'm glad that you at least responded cuz some artist don't even respond at all i get like really >.> what ever but thank you for trying to help thanks and i love all your drawings :) sorry if you don't understand some stuff i wrote i'm not that good at spelling :P
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thee i always respond ;7;/
you're welcome ;u;
and thank you <3
i understand pretty much everything you said xD
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NagishaDrazuki Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Artist
pfff, soooooo sweeet ;A; ich liebe deine Idee mit den Outfits einfach super, also Bikini und die
Badehose von ihm xD so lovely style!! Totenkopf-Bikini ;D awesome!! und so schöne Coloration...
wie immer tolle arbeit gemacht hurrr :iconloveloveplz:
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danke QAQ <333
ooh die ourfits sind nicht alle von mir <3 mir gehört nur Roxy und ihre badekleider <3
Ivys sind von :icontantchen: erfunden und Rileys von :iconchaosdrawer: <3
Danke nochmal ;u;/


Gehst du eig ab und zu zu so Comic börsen und cosplay treffs? die sind ja oft in zürich xD
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NagishaDrazuki Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Artist
Bitte, bitte >u< *knuddel*
ohh, dennoch, hast sie toll umgesetzt und so schick
coloriert ;u; bitte bitte nochmals <333

hmm, letztens wäre ich gegangen, aber dann ist was
dazwischengekommen, weshalb ich leider nicht gegangen
bin o3o aber war schon mal, gehe nicht immer xD aber wäre
witzig wenn ich dich sehen würde =u=
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Fiavekki Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Zorua....
The cutest thing that sat on the face of the earth..

SFGNKHGSAKGHA YOU DRAW HIM SOOO CUTE oWo
:la:
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jah zorua Q7Q <3

Thanks <33 ;u;/
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Fiavekki Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
By the way, when you said you tried roxy's pose and you said it hurt your back, I decided to try it... and I can pretty much agree with you OWO xD
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know right XDD
Roxy must either be resistant to pain or be super agile XD
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Fiavekki Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Yeah probably QuQ xD
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KawaiiKitsuneChan908 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh my goodness Rima~ i can't begin to tell you how awesome this picture is !! I can only tell you i went back to look at this picture more than 7 times today ~ It took me till now to actually tell you how much of a good job you have done !!
You never stop amazing me !!
You will forever and always be my inspiration !! Q v Q
Never stop drawing ?
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwww omg :iconcraiplz:Thank you so much \Q7Q/ <333333
:icondragonhug::glomp::huggle::icondragonglomp:
i'm not planning to stop QuQ/
:heart:
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Trashboat88 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
The Guy in the middle looks like Yoru Kyougi this guy [link]
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you think xD
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wolfie159 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ITS SO BEAUTIFUL! ;A:
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<33Thank you <3 ;u;
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wolfie159 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome <3
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fionafirefox Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the zorua <333
i love zorua lol

but your art is amazing, once again

theres almost barely room for improvement, in my eyes.
the way you draw hair is just amazing. i would personally never be able to do that XD
also, your anatomy is very well done, and the proportion is great ^^
just one last thing, XD
i really love the way you do eyes.
they just.... look so real! when i see your drawings i'm like, literraly, in awe.

good job! <33
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jah me too <33 zoruas are so adorable <3

Youuuuuu QAQ Thank you so very very much :iconcraiplz: <3333
:glomp::hug:
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fionafirefox Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome <333
i really enjoy looking at your art it's like the most amazing thing ever
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zMetsu-Chanz Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
This is just so nice ! i love how you drew zorua >w<
I also love the way you draw your eyes *A* So...beautiful....! <3
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thnk you so much <3
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zMetsu-Chanz Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
You're welcome ^^ I can't wait to see more beautiful art by you c: ~
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TikzunniScarlat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student General Artist
cool *-*
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks <3
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Idasida20 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Amazing <3
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