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Fun At The Beach by RimaPichi Fun At The Beach by RimaPichi
AMG i think this took 3 or 4 days... or more :'D

and it's finally dooone TuT
It's a group pic with mine and my two friends's Pokemon trainers ;u;/


and i'm kinda dissapointed :'D It didn't turn the way i wanted TuT
And i'm sure it's one of those pic where i worked for days and will get like.. 5 comments or so <x'D

Sooo Ivy's (the girl at the front) perspective failed ;u; I don't know how people do that TuT
Roxy's (the black/Pink girl) Pose is painful xD i tried it and it hurt my back xD
And Riley (the boy) well... it's the first time i shadet a topless guy xD

The clouds look a bit too uhm.. "Thick" xD But i fail at clouds anyway xD and i don't even remember when i did clouds the last time >3<

And for the water... I always wanted to be able to draw water, but it's just too hard xD My friend showed me a tutorial (which i'll link as soon as i found it again)
But i still failed xD

Oh and btw the Zorua is small because it's still a baby xD

ANYWAY

Hope you like it ;7;/
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Pokemon by Nintendo
Ivy by :icontantchen:
Riley by :iconchaosdrawer:
Roxy and art by me :iconrimapichi: ;u;

I'd be happy if someone would give me critique for improvement QuQ
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Critique by XxEeveeStarxX Jun 27, 2012, 8:07:47 AM
I know you wrote "perspective failed" and it's somewhat true to an extent. I'm not all that great of an artist, but I know how perspective works (I just can't draw it if I needed to.) She could actually be closer in front so that it works.

The clouds fill the background of the picture just fine. It's a great background, but some clods have some rough edges and don't blur into the sky.

The water could be murkier, but water murkiness depends on where you live (where I live it's a blue-ish evergreen color)

The characters drawn, however, are perfect, like how you usually make them. I hope to see more from you in the future :D
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I'll start with the background. I found the sky very well done, only with the condition that the top clouds doesn't blur well with the sky, but that's the only fail I found, the under clouds and light color of the sky brings a beach perspective.

The water is fine but I think you can add some more of lights, like white lines with rough edges for make it more shiny cause the sunshine is strong. The horizon looks too regular, it would see more fine if you add more irregular edges to it.

You are right about Roxy's pose and her butt looks weird in comparison with the body. I found Ivy's perspective fine but she only needs be more closer or bigger.

The color of the skin looks too much light, they need more shade and not much light, also some parts of the clothing and pokemon, for example teddiursa, zorua, Roxy's hair and the girls' swimming costume.

By the way, you draw very well the anatomy and make the characters show the mood you want, the pokemon are cute and don't look like the games' way but them looks fine and well done.

Continue drawing cause I love your drawings and only with practice you will be better. =D
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Ariana-Olds Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   Traditional Artist
I love Zorua! <3
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me too <3
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Ariana-Olds Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
i love absol
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love all dark and ghost types xD
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Ariana-Olds Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013   Traditional Artist
Cool ♥ I love eevee
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Maxwell-eleven Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You love pokemon, no? So cute!Heart
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yah <333
thanks ;u;
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Yumi-chii123 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
the smile...the mouth is too big (the girl on the right).....is roxy a kuudere(quiet ones) type?
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RimaPichi Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think there aren't really right sizes with the mouths in anime styles xD
Yes she is c:
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TheDoomGeneration Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Yeah, you're right about the pose for the girl on the left, it's actually a reoccuring issue in comics, most people call it the boobs&butt pose. It'd require no spine basically, should probably try to avoid it, it throws off the entirety of the character.
The rest looks pretty okay, though!
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